1. The main point of my essay is to help softball players have longer and healthier careers because injuries can be so detrimental not only in softball but in life and I think it’s important to take every precaution possible to try and avoid injuries.
2. The purpose of my essay is to educate my audience of young softball girls of the proper ways to train from a young age, and how to build up mental toughness in order to improve, and prolong athletic performance.
3. My audience is young softball players.
The problem with softball injuries is not due to lack training, or lack of muscle, but a problem that can be solved by age appropriate drills, and physical and mental toughness. By practicing the proper technique from a young age and building up mental toughness, not only will your performance be better, your career will be prolonged, and your body will be healthier long after you finish playing.
Is audience clear? I feel like my wording doesn’t really flow.